Open Poetry #30 |
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The Wine of Essence |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
The Wine of Essence The essence of your wine pervades A mountain stream in full cascade Filling spaces of my mind I did not know and could not find It arrows into my desire Upon a view of grand admire Overwhelms my mind of think With open eyes that cannot blink It ties me with a magic rope Braded with the hemp of hope Sets a seal upon my heart Forever is the marks impart Sings a subtle lullaby Floating like a butterfly Setting on my flowers power Every minute of the hour Alas my head does spin and wheel With the essence of the feel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now these are the sigh poems I look for... Good morning m'friend! ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"The essence of your wine pervades A mountain stream in full cascade" My my Sy..what a lovely image this conjures up in my mind. Another wonderful write from you this frosty morn. Well done poet sir. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
gives the reader a form of insight into a very positive outlook on love....and the real meanings/purpose imbedded deeply within the spiritual...a real feel good poem my friend...thank you for sharing. Luv Lee J |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
An intoxicating read. *S* Excellent work, my friend. *S* |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi Seymour...love the poem. But then you do these oh so well. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine And you are the sunshine I look for. ![]() Nancy, You are the butter on my toast. Now lets have some tea. ![]() LeeJ Morning sweet and I thank you with a ![]() suthern Good play on subject matter, ![]() EvocativeVerse2 Love your comments. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sigh...wonderful.... Good morning Sey! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, Thank you and good morning sweet. ![]() |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
As always...beautifuly lyrical. Eric |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This is just lovely, and you are quite the connoisseur... ~K~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oooooooyeah...kinda kinky ![]() |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
A mountain stream in full cascade Filling spaces of my mind So vivid. Thank you, again, for sharing your talent. Sadie |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I've just got to find a cork-popping dude for your versed-celebrations~ Such a melodic flow ...~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sy, as always perfect! the lady you write these beautiful poems for is so lucky but then again...seems so are you ![]() wonderful! Hugs, Amy ![]() "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"It ties me with a magic rope Braded with the hemp of hope" Beauuuuuuutiful and awesome writing, Sey. You never cease to amaze me. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Let me know when you do. LOL ![]() Amy, Thank you dear you are a sweetheart. iliana Your pleasure is my pleasure. LOL ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sings a subtle lullaby Floating like a butterfly Setting on my flowers power Every minute of the hour Seymour, this is so pretty. I really do like it. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel And you are my nector. ![]() |
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