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PouringJewels
Member

since 2003-09-18

Posts 158
Maryland

0 posted 2004-01-06 06:25 AM

     My back was against the wall
     You saw me and just walked away
     Never heard my call
     When I cried out your name

     You said I was the one
     that had to reap what you have sowed

     These dreams of you
     never came true

     You slapped me across the face
     I just turned the other cheek

     Keeping my back against the wall

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

1 posted 2004-01-06 07:30 AM

Terrific writing. There are many who will see themselves against your wall.

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-01-06 08:15 AM

good write,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-01-06 10:19 AM

Julia~

Painful poetic emote~
Very well said, poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2004-01-06 10:21 AM

Suspension of breath ... through this well penned pain.
Love, Margherita

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2004-01-07 01:24 AM

Hey sis! I'm reading this in Buffalo, I'll be home later this week...We'll go have a drink.

Love ya,

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2004-01-07 02:18 AM

Hey Julia:

instantly I hear Joe Walsh . . .

"In the City"

*smile*

(ok Ed was logged in oops, its me Sue LOL)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-01-07 04:36 AM

yeah, I know that wall...sad write here

Terrina
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

8 posted 2004-01-07 04:01 PM

We take the good and the bad. Great poem. Look forward to reading more.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2004-01-07 04:32 PM

enjoyed

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2004-01-07 04:32 PM

enjoyed

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