Open Poetry #30 |
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Against the wall |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
My back was against the wall You saw me and just walked away Never heard my call When I cried out your name You said I was the one that had to reap what you have sowed These dreams of you never came true You slapped me across the face I just turned the other cheek Keeping my back against the wall |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Terrific writing. There are many who will see themselves against your wall. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike![]() ![]()
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
good write, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julia~ Painful poetic emote~ Very well said, poetess~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Suspension of breath ... through this well penned pain. Love, Margherita |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hey sis! I'm reading this in Buffalo, I'll be home later this week...We'll go have a drink. Love ya, |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hey Julia: instantly I hear Joe Walsh . . . "In the City" *smile* (ok Ed was logged in oops, its me Sue LOL) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I know that wall...sad write here |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
We take the good and the bad. Great poem. Look forward to reading more. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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