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marcel
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0 posted 2004-01-06 09:45 PM



Ice Queen

A rose in the winter
Is beauty personified
Through the eyes of the sun—
Invisible tears kiss the hardened ground
Making blood stained thorns prickle with laughter.

The cold love of a woman
Is a hypnotic beauty
Through the eyes of a man—
Warm lips kiss her inviting red smile
Making her blue smiling soul chuckle in amusement.

Hail to the Ice Queen
As she tramples the red roses
That adorn her garden’s walkway—
She broods under the crying moon
As tears of jealousy kiss her red stained feet
Causing the Ice Queen to giggle with delight.

Marcel

© Copyright 2004 keith marcel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-06 09:50 PM


Marcel~
This is uniquely creative~
Beautiful~

A delight to read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-01-06 11:19 PM


Nice writing...James
iliana
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3 posted 2004-01-07 01:37 AM


Really creative -- I liked!
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