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Walkin' The Dog!!! (Duet W/ThisDiamond)
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Walkin' The Dog!!! (Duet W/ThisDiamond) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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The door ajar, the culprit in, his shoe was chewed in places six. A paw print here, a puddle there, the latch would now be first to fix. A scoundrel small of fluff and eye did sneak between the opening, A soulful frown and whimp'ring cry would take from him the anger's sting. Her thoughts transposed in artful she To share a likened child with he And puppy prince could do no wrong His deeds so cute, his trail so long And share she did…the days and nights That knit the sweaters, calmed his frights The two a.m. was manly made But she stood by with cheer displayed The thickest towels to soak his brow Perhaps once his, in service now A teething ring of leather strap Perchance the founding fingers tap Through gritted teeth surprise, un-clued It seemed that he became unglued This pup was cute and very shrewd A heart was won, this fluffy dude. A trail was laid in wag of tinkle across the den and to the door. It brought a frown and nose’s wrinkle This was enough, she heard his roar. He called the Vet about a neuter and caught the stare of her in glare. She took away their one computer, no longer would she and he share. And now the bed is warmed by one who wears the blue jeans and long socks The couch is where they fight in fun as she plays and he tugs her locks. For man’s best friend can be sweet talked by woman’s ways....and away they walked!!! Even the pooch gets the upper hand, errr....paw. Thanx Kathy....much enjoyed your input on this little piece of somethin' different!! [This message has been edited by Magnus (01-04-2004 07:49 PM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
You guys did great with this and what a fun write - I enjoyued it thoroughly - Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent job you two! So good to see you du-eting again. Hugs to you both. In the midst of winter.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I loved this TD and Barry...and could relate! Two  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I loved this, Barry and Kathleen, And so did my little Scooter...  Hugs to you both, Ethel |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
From tears to laughter without a moment's notice. Dog gone what you two cooked up here. Love this! Patricia |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
You two got this pet lover's attention! Oh, yes, the bitter sweet of it all, too! Cute write! Sadelite |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
absolutely terrific! I'm jealous! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You two.......very cute. I especially liked: "Her thoughts transposed in artful she To share a likened child with he And puppy prince could do no wrong His deeds so cute, his trail so long" heheheheheheh! [This message has been edited by iliana (01-05-2004 03:21 AM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
wonderfully done....hugsssx2 ~~**~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, thank you both for the smiles! Very funny and well written. Love, Margherita  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Barry...it is always so much fun to skip down the runway of imagination with you. What a wonderful talent you have. Thanks for the smile. TD |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... This is great... I thoroughly enjoyed! *S* |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i give this 2 paws up very cute and unexpected |
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