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xela
Junior Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 13

0 posted 2004-01-04 02:40 AM

I know I'm cold
I'm shaking, shuddering
But I feel nothing but warmth
I want to jump up and down
And twirl around and
Make the most of this numbness
This dizzyness
This warmth
That radiates through my fingertips
And flushes my cheeks
That fills my lungs, and shuts my eyes.

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wickedbeautifulpoetry
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 84
Indiana, USA

1 posted 2004-01-04 02:47 AM

I really like this poem!

-katie-

Michelle_loves_Mike

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Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-01-04 08:24 AM

very good stuff Xela,,,I've been so cold that my fingers felt warm,,,,,,,brrr,,,
well done
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

3 posted 2004-01-05 10:08 PM

Salutations!

I forgot about the "flushing cheeks" part. Excellent description!

McLean

lovejunkie
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 93
Indiana

4 posted 2004-01-05 10:11 PM

makes me feel warm inside.

-steph

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-01-07 01:43 AM

This made me enjoy the cold! Enjoyed reading it!

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