Open Poetry #30 |
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Lover's High |
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Kazeru Junior Member
since 2003-12-16
Posts 31 |
No lover's thoughts Could ever wander In this haven of bliss This miracle place In the form of A maiden so true I sighed, I quivered I stood and thought Of feelings of happiness She bestowed so sincere Just a precious smile Of purest gold You've entranced me Taken my heart in your hand I gladly accepted Inviting you with open arms Because a love so deep You find only once... ->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<- |
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Michelle_loves_Mike![]() ![]()
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
very sweet, I was waiting for a pale unicorn to enter the scene,,,, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh how lovely...simply lovely. ~Soft smiles, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely... especially the last verse! *S* |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jean-Phillippe~ Entrancing read~ Very nicely done~ Welcome to Passions~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing with us. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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