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Kazeru
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0 posted 2004-01-06 04:52 PM



No lover's thoughts
Could ever wander
In this haven of bliss
This miracle place
In the form of
A maiden so true

I sighed, I quivered
I stood and thought
Of feelings of happiness
She bestowed so sincere
Just a precious smile
Of purest gold

You've entranced me
Taken my heart in your hand
I gladly accepted
Inviting you with open arms
Because a love so deep
You find only once...

->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<-

© Copyright 2004 Jean-Phillippe Wijnholds - All Rights Reserved
Michelle_loves_Mike
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1 posted 2004-01-06 04:58 PM


very sweet, I was waiting for a pale unicorn to enter the scene,,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-01-06 05:00 PM


Oh how lovely...simply lovely.
~Soft smiles, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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3 posted 2004-01-06 05:25 PM


This is lovely... especially the last verse! *S*
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4 posted 2004-01-06 05:49 PM


Jean-Phillippe~
Entrancing read~
Very nicely done~

Welcome to Passions~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

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5 posted 2004-01-06 06:19 PM


This is a very beautiful poem.
Thanks for sharing with us.
Hugs  
Ethel

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