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She Has Chosen
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She Has Chosen |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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She has reached her point of no return and unlike she thought, she did not go kicking and screaming, but rather quietly, happily. She is sorry, she thinks for making this hard disrupting your life she had to choose, everyone said but it was not how everyone thought. In the end it was predicted to choose the one who loved her the most but with her that is never how it goes. She has reached her point of no return ending all deliberation with a hug and a kiss goodnight She doesn't know what to think All she knows is she wants to feel the touch of his lips over and over. |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
Wow, I totally relate to this poem. There are always choices in life, and although I should go with the 'one who loves me the most' I always go with the one I love the most, and that kills my heart... Thank you for your poem. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Terrina- go figure, huh? No matter how much you realize that the other person loves you, you have to go with your heart, not theirs.. |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
very nice, I liked this alot |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
As old as I am I sure relate to this, and always followed my gut instincts. There is a great message in this poem Allysa, nicely done. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep...I understand |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
it seems that people are always telling us "to make the right choice", I always say, do what is right for you,,,,,,,that choice may not be what others expect, or want to see,,,but,,,it's your heart, not theirs,,,, i like your poem Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Incredible theme, Allysa. You did this perfectly. And how true it is. Beautiful. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Allysa~ 'All she knows is she wants to feel the touch of his lips over and over.' Uh huh ... "to thine own self be true"~ Love it sweetie~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Wow, thank you all very very much. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Almost never, that is so. But sometimes, some blessed times... |
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