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The Logic of Wind
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The Logic of Wind |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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{The Ocean is beautiful at night:} Stretched beyond sight in imagination of shadows and sand -- I hold no regrets, until evening blends my thoughts into a pattern of black, I wish for colors of dusk, in woven fabrics, and orchestras of sound, but the logic of wind blows them silently apart, Like fireflies they remain untouchable Sometimes: a gentle mist dances provocatively, making waves jealous of time forgotten, leaving traces along an island of audience Pavilions of light embrace tidal waters, feeding sand it’s mellowing color of life, Where: Falling from scattered stars A tender heart beats, embraced in silent storms, for a mindful soul weeping still in winter ~~**~~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodness, Lauren, you are good!! All of it is beautiful, but this part... I wish for colors of dusk, in woven fabrics, and orchestras of sound, but the logic of wind blows them silently apart, Like fireflies they remain untouchable This part is really breathtaking!  Hugs, sweet lady  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-05-2004 11:14 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes Just lovely, enjoyed. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
quote:is too cool! i love this! as a whole it's a very nice piece. oh - and the ocean is always beautiful.   |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh yes.... I know this logic. Thank you, Lauren! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Breathtaking Lauren...just amazing seeing and feeling through your eyes. You have remarkable talent lady! Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ My GAWD ... your writing is soooooooo awesome~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your style is very captivating. Beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Green Eyes I was initially going to quote part of your write: "I wish for colors of dusk, in woven fabrics, and orchestras of sound" but then as I read on I couldn't embrace or capture only part of it because the whole thing is beautiful. Thank you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very well done Lauren, I too enjoy that part of the sea, the shore, the dwindle of light until dark...such peace. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lauren, This is absolutely breathtaking! "I wish for colors of dusk, in woven fabrics, and orchestras of sound, but the logic of wind blows them silently apart" Gosh that is beautiful! I'm in awe Take care hon. Amy  "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I hold no regrets, until evening blends my thoughts into a pattern of black, I wish for colors of dusk, in woven fabrics, and orchestras of sound ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Goodness Lauren, it doesn't get any better than this!! Love the peace and tranquility, and the way you make it dance in the wind. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
This is just soooo good - I loved it - paul |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A tender heart beats, embraced in silent storms, for a mindful soul weeping still in winter Lauren..........{you already know} this whispers to me.....my heart and soul.... what a gift you give, what a treasure you truly are....   If the sun never rises I want to go down in flames I want the last thing I hear is you whispering my name... {Trace Adkins} |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent in form and content...loud applause ________ice ><> |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This exquisite piece could only have been written by our Greeneyes! Love it. Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM makes a cold day warm very good stuff Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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