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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2004-01-05 07:16 AM


A gold chain held a locket,
Which had broken at the clasp,
The chain she had to hock it,
The heart held a picture past
She kept it in her pocket
A memory she could grasp.
All else she had forgot
This was her thought at last.

Gloom


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Michelle_loves_Mike
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1 posted 2004-01-05 07:34 AM


sounds like someone broke free
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Sadelite
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2 posted 2004-01-05 10:46 AM


Good morning, P.G.,

   I liked...
   Have a good day.
                      ~~Sadie

(BTW, I've AGAIN revised  "to change the SHAPE of RAIN"  (I should rename it "to change the SHAPE of POEM!" )

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (01-05-2004 12:03 PM).]

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-01-05 12:44 PM


I wish I had only one memory to grasp...but there are too many
iliana
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4 posted 2004-01-07 01:44 AM


Well, what can I say -- simply eloquent writing in my book!
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