Open Poetry #30 |
Konrad's Musings |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Is this how it is when two ships pass each leaving a ripple to meld in a wake? She danced upon the stars Walked the waters fine Ships and diamonds all in haze In the mists of time Konrad’s thoughts were of the woman he had seen in search of him, the one who tried to see through the mists to where his steps had pressured sand and she had listened, he could see that, in the way of her touch to stone, her eye seeking eyes, her gaze averted as if she heard his sounds and it made him wonder what she truly saw? All he knew, now, was that she left this in his mind… She danced upon the stars Walked the waters fine Ships and diamonds all in haze In the mists of time ~*~ Photo, courtesy, J&M Divilbiss |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"She danced upon the stars Walked the waters fine Ships and diamonds all in haze In the mists of time" What can I say? Perfect...just perfect. Love ya lady! Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Love the feel of this poem KJ, nice one. Such a treat upon a ship...looking into the haze...seeing all that we see. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Konrad’s thoughts were of the woman he had seen in search of him, the one who tried to see through the mists to where his steps had pressured sand and she had listened, he could see that, in the way of her touch to stone, her eye seeking eyes, her gaze averted as if she heard his sounds and it made him wonder what she truly saw?" I knew he'd be back... Now, off to find Dana?????? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
So lovely Karilea! Enjoyed. Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
You took my breath away along with a few tears...for in beauty, sorrow strays. Patricia |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Beauty and sorrow often go hand in hand... Well done. One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
your heart is a diamond |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"She danced upon the stars Walked the waters fine Ships and diamonds all in haze In the mists of time" Enchanting! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
"She danced upon the stars" is fine but "to where his steps had pressured sand" is my favorite. Must be a man thing. This is beautiful. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
She danced upon the stars Walked the waters fine Ships and diamonds all in haze In the mists of time'''' hugssss.....beautiful read Karilea~ ~~**~~ |
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