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wordwizard
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on the way to next world

0 posted 2003-12-26 01:44 AM




Turn away from look alike realities
each one sure of existed dualities
think of the day when carols are sung
think of the chartable thoughts swung
what with staves removed, and hoods dropped
able to give, some good could be cropped

When a man gives from the heart
turns to a new reality or start
capable of doing so much good
walked on palm leaves, understood?
faith, hope, a vein towards charity
bleached lands yielded poor parity...

Appreciated the song, the touch of season
the smell of cedar oils within reason
the sight of merriment, and how its spent
far from sober thoughts or days of lent
its a sixth sense, common sense for free...
extra sense to separate honey from a bee
I laud a sixth sense which is to be
and a common sense for a deeper see
© Copyright 2003 ecrivan





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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2003-12-26 02:21 AM


Wordwizard -- really liked this stanza:

"appreciated the song, the touch of season
the smell of cedar oils within reason
the sight of merriment, and how its spent
far from sober thoughts or days of lent
its a sixth sense, common sense for free...
extra sense to separate honey from a bee
I laud a sixth sense which is to be
and a common sense for a deeper see"

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2003-12-26 04:13 AM


Very beautiful and deep.
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-12-26 04:14 AM


very fitting of your screen name here

enjoyed this piece

wordwizard
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on the way to next world
4 posted 2003-12-26 12:35 PM


That was a name suggested by Keth some time ago...I guess it is appropriate


ecrivan
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my own state
5 posted 2004-01-05 12:02 PM


Thank you Margherita and Passing for reading
hope you both spent dome godd holidays


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