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Hoilday Sense |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Turn away from look alike realities each one sure of existed dualities think of the day when carols are sung think of the chartable thoughts swung what with staves removed, and hoods dropped able to give, some good could be cropped When a man gives from the heart turns to a new reality or start capable of doing so much good walked on palm leaves, understood? faith, hope, a vein towards charity bleached lands yielded poor parity... Appreciated the song, the touch of season the smell of cedar oils within reason the sight of merriment, and how its spent far from sober thoughts or days of lent its a sixth sense, common sense for free... extra sense to separate honey from a bee I laud a sixth sense which is to be and a common sense for a deeper see © Copyright 2003 ecrivan [This message has been edited by wordwizard (12-26-2003 12:33 PM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wordwizard -- really liked this stanza: "appreciated the song, the touch of season the smell of cedar oils within reason the sight of merriment, and how its spent far from sober thoughts or days of lent its a sixth sense, common sense for free... extra sense to separate honey from a bee I laud a sixth sense which is to be and a common sense for a deeper see" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful and deep. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very fitting of your screen name here enjoyed this piece |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
That was a name suggested by Keth some time ago...I guess it is appropriate |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thank you Margherita and Passing for reading hope you both spent dome godd holidays  |
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