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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-01-04 08:06 PM

As mists come to cloud and clear away
My heart is opened…like a music box
What held me dear to visions past?
Might it be a proclamation of the future?

The identity of what is gone
To name what is missed and mighty

As able as I am to sing the songs of tomorrow
Build the dreams of a life long quest
Stand on my own and bow to the watchtower
Symmetry that lacks the baseline of the note

Turning in storm, before the cold can crust over
White blankets isolate the sun away to spring

My arms fall limp in consolation of the stir
And I long to be held to the beating heart
Of love

Copyright Kkh 1/4/04

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (01-04-2004 08:17 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-01-04 08:35 PM

And from above, this tower high
a lover's words shall gently fall
upon the ear in aching sigh
with tenderness and waking call.

And from the stir of silken dress
and hands bejeweled from kingly realm
A woman sighs in her egress
to take with him a queen's due helm.

You have a touch that caresses the
mind most softly...in all that you
write...

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

2 posted 2004-01-04 08:36 PM

TD...

I can't FEEL the longing in this...whew! Thanks...great write!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-01-05 02:31 AM

"Turning in storm, before the cold can crust over
White blankets isolate the sun away to spring

My arms fall limp in consolation of the stir
And I long to be held to the beating heart
Of love"

Your words sparkle -- now, I see where you arrived with your penname. I enjoyed reading this! ........lol.......jo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-01-05 02:34 AM

gawd! this is crushing...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-01-05 02:26 PM

Kathleen~
Just doesn't come much prettier than your original thoughts~

'As able as I am to sing the songs of tomorrow
Build the dreams of a life long quest'

*sigh*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2004-01-05 02:30 PM

It's what we all want..

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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