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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-01-05 12:55 PM



Tender,

Tender,Subtle

breath,


Air,

Thoughts....

Glass, clear,

Transparent, unbroken,

Tender rose petals,

Gentle rain,

Cascading.....


falling...

teardrop...by

teardrop..dripping

slowly,into my

heart..

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

© Copyright 2004 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2004-01-05 12:57 PM


ARH, this is so pretty, but sad, in  way.
Hope all is well.  
Hugs  
Ethel

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2004-01-05 01:02 PM


Ethel thanks..as you can see by the poems posted this morning and our replies...all is definitely well....

I was inspired to write this after watching.."The Return Of the King"....I came out from the movie crying....it was a great third part to Lord Of The Rings....

Thanks for your replies and concern~

ARH~



Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (01-05-2004 01:03 PM).]

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3 posted 2004-01-05 02:58 PM


RomanticHeart~
Concerned, UNTIL I read your explanation~

Wonderful write sweet poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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