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Goodknight
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0 posted 2003-12-27 02:21 PM


Here is another of my grandkids poems - they are so special it seems that I need to write of them often...

Little ones they are
They reach for a star
They love and they muddle
We love them a bundle
Adventures we take
Sometimes making the noise of a snake
Museums we visit a time for inquisite
A bath splashes wet all over our lashes
So wonderful they are
I think we caught the star



© Copyright 2003 Paul Tofte - All Rights Reserved
Michelle_loves_Mike
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1 posted 2003-12-27 02:36 PM


sweeeeeeet, you can see that you are a proud pop pop,,,,,enjoy them always,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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2 posted 2003-12-27 08:27 PM


Just came back from visiting the grandkids...
nothing like it in thw world.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Martie
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3 posted 2003-12-27 09:52 PM


Paul...wonderful they are...those stars!!  
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4 posted 2003-12-27 09:58 PM


Paul, this is so sweet.....
nothing like the grin on a proud PaPa's face.
Hugs to you and them  
Ethel

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5 posted 2004-01-04 10:16 PM


Paul,

   How sweet these reflections are.   Those grand kids of yours are sure lucky to have a grandpa who shares the good things in life!

                       Sadelite

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6 posted 2004-01-05 02:40 AM


sweet!
iliana
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7 posted 2004-01-05 02:43 AM


Yes -- I agree.  This is such a precious way of saying what you feel -- may I say this one -- hope so, cause I'm going to!  .......BEEEEwell........jo
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8 posted 2004-01-05 02:23 PM


Paul~
PRECIOUS !!!!!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

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