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Open Poetry #30

Cold Feet

MexicoCityBlues
Junior Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 48
The Point of Know Return

0 posted 2004-01-04 05:13 PM

sat in front of
Grandma's heater
and melted

"The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye. The story of love is Hello and Goodbye. Until we meet again..." -Jimi Hendrix

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-01-05 12:53 PM

Short and very sweet

Dave

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-01-05 02:09 AM

nice

lovejunkie
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 93
Indiana

3 posted 2004-01-05 03:54 PM

I think you said I lot with so few words. I know this is one of your favorites and that makes it even more special.

-Steph

wickedbeautifulpoetry
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 84
Indiana, USA

4 posted 2004-01-05 03:57 PM

Very good.
-katie-

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

5 posted 2004-01-05 04:51 PM

nice, very nizzzzeeeee

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

6 posted 2004-01-05 10:47 PM

Wandering eyes

Found your poem,
short & direct,
and smiled.

McLean

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