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wickedbeautifulpoetry
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since 2004-01-03
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Indiana, USA

0 posted 2004-01-04 12:22 PM


it makes me die
to look at you
and think of things
that i wouldn’t think
about anyone else
knowing that
you are my goal
my unreachable
like reaching the tip-top of mt. everest
it is a hope
a childish, foolish dream
but yet i still bathe in it every night
let it stew in my dreams
rejuvenated by morning
a deeper fabrication
i lie to myself
to keep the thought of you
vibrant
if only in my mind
every piece of me loves
every piece of you
i love you to the depths
of my bones
folded into my marrow
is pure adoration
only for you
but you don’t know
i hide my secrets from you
because you can never know
this has happened before
a love corrupted by
foolish impatience
i prefer waiting to see what is to come
rather than bestowing an undesirable fate
upon myself

© Copyright 2004 Katie - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-01-04 12:30 PM


Just be patient and let love develop Katie.
Good write...sounds like you're head over heels.
Good luck to you!
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Ericc
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2 posted 2004-01-04 12:45 PM


Very passionate!

Eric

wickedbeautifulpoetry
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3 posted 2004-01-04 12:51 PM


Thanks for posting!

-katie-

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-01-04 12:52 PM


I have little patience, this is a good write
Ravenwolfvoyager
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5 posted 2004-01-04 02:25 PM


A wonderful write. I hope that it finds you.
Startime55
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6 posted 2004-01-04 02:27 PM


You never know what the future holds...Dreams have a way of becoming reality..

Goodknight
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7 posted 2004-01-04 02:31 PM


full of passion and desire - a powerful view of intense feelings - very well done - Paul
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