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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2004-01-03 07:14 PM


In measurement be lingers fingers tropical depressions
Such sensual bewildering of touch and torch expressions
Following the tremble of the inner male, that seeds a sprightly bloom
All through these half lit corridors of spell and folly spirit room

Muscle lay protectively upon the slight and rigid plea
That random capers fondle gently, easing open dreams intently
Sizing up the atmosphere before a glimpse allowed appear
All through the inner breadth and beat of what conversely given treat

Shine and Rise

The amazement lifts my eyes…songs that vary in creation
Scattered toys in joys migration free upon this manly sea
Litmus showers quiet hours hum in chords of pallid strum
Again, to taper to the wise of teary eyes, contended prize

In measurement of tape and cradle, mouthed of futile spoon and ladle
Held in gentle motions upon the crest of hour glass oceans
The strongest and the tallest lore, upon the thinking more is more
Index finger beckons to the watchful eye and reckons softer at the heart

More tangible a sweet tart


Copyright Kkh 1/3/04


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2004-01-03 07:20 PM


It seems as I read each line I can weave my own vision of a world that sings to me...I totally enjoyed reading this poem with all the visions it inspired...

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
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Missouri
2 posted 2004-01-03 09:16 PM


Your images...well, amazing work!

Patricia

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever
3 posted 2004-01-03 11:13 PM


Beautiful, TD...thank you.


Love and Light...jc


This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

[This message has been edited by jaicie114 (01-03-2004 11:21 PM).]

xela
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since 2004-01-03
Posts 13

4 posted 2004-01-04 02:56 AM


it was very lyrical, and a great read! I loved the words you used, showed great creativity. Won't even tell you what it made me think of...  
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-01-04 04:51 AM


BRAVO!
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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6 posted 2004-01-04 12:52 PM


This is so lyrical and full of beauty...great job!

Eric

Ravenwolfvoyager
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7 posted 2004-01-04 02:27 PM


It is aspiring and captivating. A very wonderful write. Thank you
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