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I'm Right Here
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I'm Right Here |
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wickedbeautifulpoetry Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 84Indiana, USA |
Do you see me I’m right here Seeingthinkingbreathing All at the same time I don’t talk maybe I feel though Badsadmadgoodhappy Do you care about me I’m right here Lookingseeingyearning Ever think about why I don’t talk You don’t talk Either This monkey sees you Sees what you do This monkey does what she Sees you do You don’t talk So I don’t talk Cyclic isn’t it If one of us Could break this Chain of loneliness It might be good Don’t you think If me and you Became a we If we take our pasts Stash them away In boxes—seal them tight We can build things Futuresplansloveshopesdreams Do you love me I’m right here |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat format, I like this |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love the presentation ...good stuff! Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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wickedbeautifulpoetry Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 84Indiana, USA |
Thanks for posting! -katie- |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Salutations! This was fun to read. I thought of my almost 2-yr-old when I got to the "monkey" part! Most fun word play here. McLean |
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wickedbeautifulpoetry Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 84Indiana, USA |
Thanks for posting, McLean! |
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