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wickedbeautifulpoetry
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0 posted 2004-01-04 11:43 AM


Do you see me
I’m right here
Seeingthinkingbreathing
All at the same time
I don’t talk maybe
I feel though
Badsadmadgoodhappy
Do you care about me
I’m right here
Lookingseeingyearning
Ever think about why
I don’t talk
You don’t talk
Either
This monkey sees you
Sees what you do
This monkey does what she
Sees you do
You don’t talk
So I don’t talk
Cyclic isn’t it
If one of us
Could break this
Chain of loneliness
It might be good
Don’t you think
If me and you
Became a we
If we take our pasts
Stash them away
In boxes—seal them tight
We can build things
Futuresplansloveshopesdreams
Do you love me
I’m right here

© Copyright 2004 Katie - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-01-04 12:30 PM


neat format, I like this
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-01-04 12:31 PM


Love the presentation ...good stuff!
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

wickedbeautifulpoetry
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3 posted 2004-01-04 12:36 PM


Thanks for posting!

-katie-

McLean
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4 posted 2004-01-05 10:11 PM


Salutations!

This was fun to read.  I thought of my almost 2-yr-old when I got to the "monkey" part!  Most fun word play here.

McLean

wickedbeautifulpoetry
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5 posted 2004-01-05 10:14 PM


Thanks for posting, McLean!
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