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Some Fishing
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Some Fishing |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Some Fishing I feel I fish for non-exist Phantoms of a mind in mist Daydreams of a hearts impale Sails of symbols that prevail In horizons edgeless wile Factoring an enzymes style Searching through the past of seem The hook is baited with a dream The line is slack the fish are weary The night is dark and time is dreary I lean against the rail in search Waiting for a simple lurch The fishing is much poorer now Perhaps it is my age somehow Or perhaps I’ve lost the power Not exactly new this flower Yet where there’s life there is hope I think I felt a subtle grope |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We've GOT to find you a new worm to turn.  Good morning, Sy! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Oh, I do like this one....Fact is I am going icefishing this morning....hope you find a "fish" that has soft skin, and not the cold-scalely ones I am after...:-) enjoyeable read, as always Semour.... _______ice ><> |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Forget the worms...I'm coming with grandma's infamous "Stinkbait and Wheatie balls". If they dont bite on that..they aint got teeth. LOL I'll even bait your hook.      Nature poets can't walk across the backyard without tripping over an epiphany. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
one thing about fishing,,,,,it brings young and older together in thought,,,,as a child you pity the fish, and when we you get older you feel a sympathy,,,in between, its every man (fish) for himself,,,,alot like life,,, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I've never been one for fishing Sy.. until the last couple of years when a good friend taught me how to bass fish...and now I love it! Wonderful to awaken to your words! ~Smiles, Hugs and Tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Seymour, I haven't been fishing since I was a child, and as I recall, it was my lack of patience that kept me from enjoying the sport. Unfortunately, I am the same as I ever was...settling for frozen fish sticks. A wonderful write. Patricia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm all set....let's go!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 that's my kind of fishing |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine I think JM found me one. LOL hugs ice Enjoyed your comment, thank you. JM, Enjoyed your reply and I'm glad you're keeping Randy. I'll have to try grandmas bait. WWRS Michelle, Good reply, enjoyed. Nancy, OK right after tea. Patricia LOL I settle for them too. Midnitesun, You are a love, hugs |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
All anglers live for that subtle grope, Sy. Keeping your hook in the water is the key. believe in what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, somehow I don't think you would have any trouble doing whatever you desire to do....fishing included. It is fun to fish, isn't it? Hugs  Ethel |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"In horizons edgeless wile Factoring an enzymes style Searching through the past of seem The hook is baited with a dream" They're out there, Sy. ~K~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...I love to fish...and I love this poem! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehe...I feel this way too sometimes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Well, now I ain't 'xactly braggin' but I did stick a shiner on my hook and let it go deep for a Large Mouth Bass - a 13lb. 13 oz. keeper~ Wanna book a guided trip with me ? *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio I'll do that. Thank you Ethel, Yes it is, Kahlil I know they are. LOL Martie, And I love you. passing, We all do sometime. Marge, I got a large mouth bass LOL I need a small mouth bass. LOL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Yet where there’s life there is hope I think I felt a subtle grope Honey, this merrits a super Drum Fish! One of which will play harmony within your life forever more.... Marvelous write...and no sir, it's not your years...or anything like that, you possess in your very own hands, the most beautiful mermaid of all....smiles and hugs... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you sweet a very nice comment. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sey -- I do so enjoy reading you! Yep, there's always hope! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thank you dear. |
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