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Open Poetry #30

broken thoughts

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-01-03 11:35 PM

i'm drinking your love
from a broken crystal glass
and i'm thinking of you,and everything you meant to me
you face still lingers in my dreams
haunting me
words echoing in the backround
its over
its over
it cant be over
i wont let it
come back..please come back
i wont be deserted like this...
it seems all to familiar..
this situation
i wont be left like this
broken
broken
...did you know a heart isnt really the shape of a heart
but an upsidedown pear...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-01-04 01:03 AM

maybe tomorrow will find you with a full glass of something sweet
Merry new year's, exhalel

xela
Junior Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 13

2 posted 2004-01-04 02:45 AM

ouch--i've been there. Keep writing, i think it helps work things out. good job

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2004-01-04 08:44 AM

be careful not to get cut on the rim of wanting them back,,,,,good write
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

4 posted 2004-01-04 09:43 AM

I am not sure your words will fix the broken crystal (the dream?). I don't think your thoughts are broken, my friend, for I do so understand them, but words seem to help me put it all into perspective...listen to what your words say...powerful as they are.

A wonderful release of thoughts.

Patricia

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