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i've got a hero
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i've got a hero |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox 
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i've got a hero who burns my soul with cigarrettes i've got a hero who smiles at me with disjointed aspirations i've got a hero who presses my buttons with eyes that never close i've got a hero who believes in me with jelly strong knees i've got a hero who holds me with broken hands i've got a hero who knows they are with untainted brilliance joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless... |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
"jelly strong knees" I like that Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat |
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chrissydome Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 73germany |
just wanted to tell you that i like "jelly strong knees", but as that's already been said... well, i like it anyway! great work! turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again... |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thia ia a very heartfelt poem. I liked it.  Hugs  Ethel |
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