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pandonov
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since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-12-30 01:49 AM

repeat the shapeless configuration of a spill. the
only shape perfectly undone. and yet again, how
could be repeated the mimicry of silence without
imitation? it is art of disguise behind plastic hands,
one mastery perfected by trendy animals. the new
is older than before, attractable by resemblance of
idea, similitude-like to something original, yet simply
older that the memory of the thought. repeat the gone.
it is a spill forgotten, and the shape shine like new.

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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1 posted 2003-12-30 01:58 AM

You are astounding! It takes a specially tuned antenna to resonate to your words, and I'm glad I've got one that's close enough to your frequency to bring you in.

I've yet to read a poem of yours that didn't stretch me in some unexpected direction.

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pandonov
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since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

2 posted 2003-12-30 02:01 AM

thanx rat, really thanx, I found people in other forums that rated my things as total crap " no purpose', and whatever. people hate to think these days, I'm not saying that my stuff are super, but at least it is no imitation of any kind. thanx again

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-12-30 02:32 AM

dang! I love the style!

you know this is a thinker poem...and you take me deep...always

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

4 posted 2003-12-30 11:52 PM

You bring out the inner dimensions, and do it well -- no crp here, not at all. This is challenging stuff and it takes serious reading, but boy is it ever expressive. What you're expressing isn't everyday stuff, and in many ways that makes it better.

~~J

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-12-31 12:36 PM

love the way you spill these ideas over onto the page, without forcing the reader's direction or POV

well done, once again

A B S T R A C T
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since 2003-12-31

Posts 27
-=NYC=-

6 posted 2003-12-31 12:46 PM

I'm liking it. It has an aura of originality.

Terrina
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since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

7 posted 2003-12-31 05:46 PM

Let me be honest and say that I probably don't quite understand the impact of this poem, or what it is saying, but I'd like too. I know that you have a way with words, that's for sure.

chrissydome
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since 2003-11-28

Posts 73
germany

8 posted 2003-12-31 07:48 PM

i really like your style. and actually your poem [well, it's not really a poem, is it] reflects my own mind! thank you for sharing your thoughts!

Ratleader

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9 posted 2003-12-31 09:55 PM

A Petre Andonov poem is like a bolt of lightning....it's good if you understand, but you can get the full impact without.....

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pandonov
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since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

10 posted 2003-12-31 10:42 PM

thank you all guys, and happy new year

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

11 posted 2004-01-01 08:16 AM

Pan, I'm glad you posted this.. You must know the reasons why..

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

12 posted 2004-01-01 03:08 PM

aha, I might Meg

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2004-01-04 07:38 AM

kind of zenlike
i like

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

14 posted 2004-01-04 07:49 AM

the new
is older than before, attractable by resemblance of
idea

~*~

it was as if those few words were bolded, they stood out so well for me. Thank you, pandonov.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2004-01-04 08:34 AM

pandonov
Your symbols fence upon a fence Touché.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

16 posted 2004-01-04 09:36 AM

Pan, this is your best (MHO).
I've read it no less than three times, and with each reading, I enjoy the subtleties of the message(s) more and more.
When someone doesn't at first understand, they need to let this rest, come back to it again a day (or year?)later, to allow the words time to sink deeper into the mind.
Thank you for the new library addition.

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