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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-01-03 04:29 PM

cradled against my heart

today i slipped my arms
up through your shirt
wrapping myself
inch by inch
within you ... until
i am you ... and beneath
the colors and memories
there's a rune for strength
and a crystal flake .....
some of you
some of me
laced through
and bound together by
the leather
around my neck
cradled against my heart
leaving impressions
only quiet patience
will erase

snow©2003

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

[This message has been edited by Snow (01-03-2004 04:30 PM).]

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2004-01-03 05:18 PM

lovely(:

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2004-01-03 08:05 PM

Like this...James

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2004-01-03 08:09 PM

Two hearts woven together by the magic of your words into one...Magnificent...

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2004-01-04 05:14 AM

Snow
Excellent love poetry...:-)
I can see Nerudas influence in this poem....a different style, of course, your own and unique, yet Pablo is there in it...
Coursing through the veins of it..
"in secret, between the shadow and the soul." (I do not love you.....Pablo Neruda)
_______ice
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Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2004-01-04 08:33 AM

ah snow,,,,,,talk about warm fuzzy feelings,,,,wonderful write
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

6 posted 2004-01-04 09:21 AM

"cradled against my heart
leaving impressions
only quiet patience
will erase"

In oneness through patience and time...ahhh in sigh. This is beautiful, Snow.

Patricia

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2004-01-04 09:23 AM

Snow
Quite an impression, enjoyed.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-01-04 12:24 PM

What an amazing talent you have.
Gawd I love your work!!
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

wickedbeautifulpoetry
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 84
Indiana, USA

9 posted 2004-01-04 12:26 PM

this is, quite simply, beautiful..
i love this!

-katie-

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-01-04 01:01 PM

indeed, I do know this

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