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You Never Really Cared |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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I don’t know how to miss something I never had. But for a child, imagination becomes life, And I lived you. He was a man of sorrows ...I am a girl of tears. (Blink, Breathe, Stand, Fight) [This message has been edited by GG (11-25-2003 10:30 PM).] |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
So much power in so few words. You make quite a statement. Brava, it is very good. Caroline the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh my, but this is a really huge write, condensed into such a powerfully small package. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Painful. Very. Love, Terri~  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know what you mean...I could say these same words to a certain man I know |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
icequeen, thanks  I was going for an impact here, since its what I felt...Midnitesun, yea, but it isn't worth any more words then this... not at all. Thanks much Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Terri, yes... it is. Its past though, I just wish it didn't affect my future so much... Thank you for the reply. Dix, yea you know.. I knew you would, you always do... you must have a horrible life if its so much like mine lol  Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alyssa~ Soooo much contained in these thoughts~ *Hugs* to you gal~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Marge, yea theres a lot there... but the cool thing is I just got three hugs from you in one shot thank you.. you're so sweet.Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
That's where it starts..... Very strong little poem here....introspective and honest, and vulnerable without being maudlin. Nice! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Alyssa Another fabulous piece of writing from you. It reminded me of one of my favourite quotes. "If I never met him I would have dreamed him into being" Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Alyssa, This is deep, but with using very few words. I hope you can overcome the pain you felt. *hugs* ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Alyssa, you write with the wisdom of one who has walked many a mile, crossed many bridges... That is a compliment... Deservedly so. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Ratleader, vulnerability is always hard... but I think anger helps in keeping the tears away. Thanks for your reply, means alot vandana, good! I'm glad you did thank youAlways, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Sue, you've gotta be the queen of quotes and yes, its much like that one, except sort of.. on the other side of the spectrum. Thanks for your reply, you take care, too.Hockeychick, I'll overcome it, its hurting more and more as I realise just how much she, even they, were not there, but I'm working through it, slowly. Thanks for your kind reply. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Barry, I know I've walked many a mile... but I only pray to God that I've truly crossed any bridges at all. If so, its because He helped. But thank you very much, that truly is a compliment. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Dynamic! Happy New Year, GG! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
iliana, wow, you dug this'n up! Thank you for your reply I wish you a happy new year too!Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
no kidding, ouch joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless... |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
You're awesome.. |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
A powerful lines...lovely Harash |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
really a powerful write... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
mytuesdaywishes, yea, ouch.... thanks for you're reply koko, you are thank you.harash, thank you for both replies. very kind Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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