Hang Down Your Head Tom Dooley

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-12-30 11:30 PM

Hang Down Your Head Tom Dooley

How did I feel in the moment
when my heart was shattered?
(As if it really mattered)
Destroyed I suppose, (I cried)
but only for that moment.
I knew I could survive,
though hard to go from
cherished to dispised.
How does it feel to be
dispised? (laughing)
For now, I'll hold my tongue.
My feelings yet to be surmised.

JamesLee
December29
2003
Miss you Jin.
When do you begin?
Where do you end?

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-12-31 12:24 PM

oh no!

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

2 posted 2003-12-31 12:40 PM

Dear, dear James...

You have more ups and downs than anyone I've ever imagined. Whew...I hope this one goes back "up" quickly for you! Thanks for the great write, as usual...

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

A B S T R A C T
Junior Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 27
-=NYC=-

3 posted 2003-12-31 12:41 PM

I think that you have too many clichés in your poem (and one is too many already). It seems as if this was thrown together hastily. If you would sit down for two hours or so and put more energy into it, you may be surprised what you can come up with.

[This message has been edited by A B S T R A C T (12-31-2003 12:42 AM).]

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2003-12-31 12:50 PM

Love's rich pageant cuts another groove across the waiting list of savages.

The endless toil of nether
Reaches the frozen wastes of possible

Shaken hands after 50 they wonder how they were ever selected and tolerated.

Behind every married couple is a wife and a husband.

Never ask why.

Dave

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

5 posted 2003-12-31 03:53 AM

ouch

hugs to you James

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-12-31 12:21 PM

Sigh ... true love has no beginning and no end, it IS.
Very efficient write!
Love and HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-12-31 12:32 PM

Ah sweet James...cheer up..love will come your way.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2003-12-31 12:44 PM

Dear James, to-morrow is a brand new year! Take heart gentle man. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2003-12-31 01:58 PM

oh James...this is so sad...heart hugs for you

and the title? I sing that song all the time! I remember it from the third grade.

hope things get better.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2003-12-31 06:14 PM

Thank you Midnitesun, jaicie, ABSTRACT, Dave, passing shadows, Margherita, Enchantress, Nighshade and Sea for reading and responding...I appreciate it...
This is old news, old feelings that come and go...actually I am doing quite well...no better or worse than usual...I like to visit all of my emotions from time to time...Happy New Year...James

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