Open Poetry #30 |
Misty Dreams |
Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Misty Dreams A dream comes floating on mists of silver gray and foggy white. Tantalizing, touching, covering you with fingers of fantasy. The words of the dream run in and out of reality, with shades and smiles that entice, willing you to awake and remember. A woman with shimmering hair, the color of honey, beckons to you to follow. Her dress of chiffon slipping down slender limbs sliding over tender mounds of delicate secrecy. Tiny straps criss crossing over a creamy, pulsating throat while draping down a cool and delicate spine. You taste the swirling mist and feel the dampness of the chilling meadow of calming green. You hear her words calling from far away. Your mind is saying awake so you can remember and capture these elusive words with paper and pen. When the sun touches your face with gentle kindness. You open your eyes hoping you will remember the words of this beauty that is buried in your nighttime Misty Dreams. Love Bon-Bon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bonnie, It's true dreams do slip away. Have you tried putting them in the freezer? LOL |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, Bon-Bon, you DID remember and it is a stunningly beautiful dream of love. Love, Margherita |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a beautiful dream, Bon-Bon. Hugs Ethel |
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alan6501 Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 89PA |
All I can say is wow. The imagery and words you used are wonderful! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Thanks for your replies folks. Glad you enjoyed. Sy No I didn't try to freeze them. Now there is an idea.LOL Does that mean I have to climb into the freezer? If I do that I might freeze more than my dreams. Heehee........ See Ya Love Bon-Bon |
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