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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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0 posted 2004-01-03 10:01 AM



Misty Dreams

A dream comes floating on mists
of
silver gray and foggy white.
Tantalizing, touching,
covering you with fingers of fantasy.
The words
of
the dream run in and out of reality,
with shades and smiles that entice,
willing you to awake and remember.
A woman with shimmering hair,
the color of honey,
beckons to you to follow.
Her dress of chiffon slipping down slender limbs sliding over tender mounds
of
delicate secrecy.
Tiny straps criss crossing over a creamy,
pulsating throat while
draping down a cool and delicate spine.
You taste the swirling mist and feel the dampness
of
the chilling meadow of calming green.
You hear her words calling from far away.
Your mind is saying awake so you can remember and capture these elusive words with paper and pen.
When the sun touches your face with gentle kindness.
You open your eyes hoping you will remember
the words
of
this beauty that is buried in your nighttime
Misty Dreams.

Love Bon-Bon

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-01-03 10:06 AM


Bonnie,
It's true dreams do slip away. Have you tried putting them in the freezer? LOL
  

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2004-01-03 10:06 AM


Wow, Bon-Bon, you DID remember and it is a stunningly beautiful dream of love.

Love, Margherita

garysgirl
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3 posted 2004-01-03 11:42 AM


This is a beautiful dream, Bon-Bon.  
Hugs  
Ethel

alan6501
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since 2004-01-03
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4 posted 2004-01-03 01:03 PM


All I can say is wow. The imagery and words you used are wonderful!
Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
5 posted 2004-01-03 01:06 PM


Thanks for your replies folks. Glad you enjoyed.
Sy
No I didn't try to freeze them. Now there is an idea.LOL Does that mean I have to climb into the freezer? If I do that I might freeze more than my dreams. Heehee........
See Ya
Love Bon-Bon

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