my black album (betta than Jay Z)

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Open Poetry #30

my black album (betta than Jay Z)

Naked Truth
Junior Member

since 2003-12-28

Posts 11
Det, Mi.

0 posted 2004-01-03 05:47 AM

INTRO:[MY BEST WRITE EVER STARING A DEMON IN HER FACE SHE WAS IN ME BUT AT MY TIME IN NEED JESUS AND A CLOSE FRIEND(NUK) FIND ME KILLING THIS WHAT I THOUGHT WAS A BEATIFUL SPIRT BUT SHE WENT MAD AND I GREW SAD!LETS SEE WHAT PEOPLE HAVE TO SAY WHEN SHE NO LONGER EXIST.]
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To me she is me and in she I see me
The most beautiful thing, she cant be seen nor touched but felt in the heart
She is not real but a fair image in the mind
make believe as a character in my book
She plays lots of roles
She is I
so she says
but who am I
Who is she?
If she not know who does?
Well I did
She died yesterday her spirit flew away in my breaths that put her to sleep
I withhold her obituary
in it lays me
with her I died yesterday
But she was invisible for the eye couldn’t see her but I could
My vision a blurrrr now
I know now, not what I see
For my eyes mislead me
And my path has come to paths
Which one do I take do I die with she
Who left me
Or do I stay as me .
only she knows how i feel
and that is real

now facing my fears-my life
i choose to live
without her
she can now rest in peace
R.I.P
she
(spirtitually you roam free)
please dont find me
i no longer need your presence
im better without thee
i thank the lord for my time of clarity...
*BEFORE ME THERE WERE MANY AFTER ME THERE WILL BE NONE. ILL BE DONE ALL THAT WILL BE LEFT IS A TON
OF MY THOUGHTS!*

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-01-03 08:03 AM

Kay, welcome to Passions! This is an interesting soul-searching write, powerfully rendered.

We are one and all in one.

Love, Margherita

candyland201
New Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 5

2 posted 2004-01-03 11:36 AM

YOUR WRITING WERE KIND OF EMOTIONAL TO ME. I FEEL SAD FOR YOU AND THE THINGS YOU HAVE WENT THROUGH. YOUR THOUGHT PROCESS AND FEELING ARE DYNAMIC. ALL I CAN SAY IS STAY STRONG. FROM THE ONE AND ONLY CANDY

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