Open Poetry #30 |
I Didn’t Feel Alone As I feel Now |
harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
I Didn’t Feel Alone As I feel Now When I didn’t think of ‘Thee’ I admit, I was totally alone. But not as I feel now With my own. I talked to her picture And felt bloom, As I didn’t have any mirror In my room. I thought ‘She’ an Ocean But always felt thrust. When I was in the desert (Alone), I couldn’t feel that lust. In this game of unknown Hide and Seek, We would be lost I didn’t think. It was heard, ‘She’ had closed her eyes, ‘Me’ then imagined ‘She’ couldn’t sleep, For so many nights. ‘Me’ alone Invited my strife, Everybody can see I’m waiting for My life. ~~~~*HARASH MAHAJAN*~~~~ |
||
© Copyright 2004 Harash Mahajan - All Rights Reserved | |||
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Harash, this is a very good poem, with lots of emotion felt within. Hugs Ethel |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is a bit sad peace to you |
||
chrissydome Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 73germany |
is "she" and "me" the same person? turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again... |
||
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The Goddess Life is there ... let her touch you and breathe her in. Enjoyed your poem. Love, Margherita |
||
harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
chrissydome.....I am sorry I could not strike your mind in first stroke...."Me" is Myself...and "She"....is the person to whom I am talking about the subject......lol always Harash |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |