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harash
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0 posted 2004-01-02 03:59 AM



I Didn’t Feel Alone As I feel Now

When I didn’t think of ‘Thee’
I admit, I was totally alone.
But not as I feel now
With my own.

I talked to her picture
And felt bloom,
As I didn’t have any mirror
In my room.

I thought ‘She’ an Ocean
But always felt thrust.
When I was in the desert (Alone),
I couldn’t feel that lust.

In this game of unknown
Hide and Seek,
We would be lost
I didn’t think.

It was heard,
‘She’ had closed her eyes,
‘Me’ then imagined
‘She’ couldn’t sleep,
For so many nights.

‘Me’ alone
Invited my strife,
Everybody can see
I’m waiting for
My life.


~~~~*HARASH MAHAJAN*~~~~

© Copyright 2004 Harash Mahajan - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2004-01-02 06:02 AM


Harash, this is a very good poem, with lots
of emotion felt within.  
Hugs  
Ethel

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-01-02 11:41 AM


this is a bit sad

peace to you

chrissydome
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germany
3 posted 2004-01-02 03:16 PM


is "she" and "me" the same person?

turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again...

Margherita
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4 posted 2004-01-03 08:43 AM


The Goddess Life is there ... let her touch you and breathe her in.

Enjoyed your poem.
Love, Margherita

harash
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5 posted 2004-01-03 10:20 AM


chrissydome.....I am sorry I could not strike your mind in first stroke...."Me" is Myself...and "She"....is the person to whom I am talking about the subject......lol

always Harash

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