Open Poetry #30 |
Freedom |
Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
FREEDOM So often taken for granted,,, by those who don't care.... Defended with blood and tears,,,, by those who choose to see... It's ours to enjoy,,,, tho many don't understand.... We are condemed by the condemed,,,, labeled evil by small minds.... Why? Freedom is never free,,, the cost is unfathomable... We are called down upon,,,, simply because of this wonderful gift.. Given out of love and pride.. to many who don't see the reality All of Americas children,, eyes open eyes closed Feel free,,to share it,,,, it's there for one,,, and all I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Alby New Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 4lost in space |
good stuff baby Mike Love you Michelle |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
And not just American children but also children of the world. Good piece... very thoughtful. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
good write RE-FUSE-TO COMPLY WE'RE TRYIN TO DO THIS OUR OWN WAY and now I'm watchin the fallen stars surroundin me 15 minutes of fame -SKINLAB- |
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alan6501 Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 89PA |
We are condemed by the condemed,,,, labeled evil by small minds.... Why? Freedom is never free,,, the cost is unfathomable... I love this part of the poem the most. It expresses so much within the words and that is sadly the truth. Small minds and close-mindedness are the reasons behind most of the issues of war and conflict in the world today. Anyways, great read!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Freedom is never free,,, the cost is unfathomable... Amen. *S* I think many forgot that for a long time... that complacency is no more. |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Baseball and Apple Pie. I cry when I sing the National Anthem at the baseball fields...I'm so proud to have freedom. McLean |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
Freedom is never free,,, the cost is unfathomable... everything comes at a price liked it, |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
thank you all for such wonderful replies,,,an extra kiss to Alby,,,,,anyway,,,this one is for my dad, he had passed not to long ago,,and was heavily on my mind on Veterans Day,,,,I was raised to respect the freedoms, and those who provide the,,,,,but , learned on my own to love and treasure them,,,,,again,,thanx all, and hugs all around Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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