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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2004-01-05 10:04 AM

This is winter
And soon our love would stay
But I was impatient
For you
To come here
And stay here
For a while

No chill can reach
Within our embrace
But spring's warmth is far away
Come here,please
Or if you'd rather
I shall come to you
Prepared to stay
Forever

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

1 posted 2004-01-05 10:23 AM

well...you seem to be comfortable with whoever this pom is about. Forever is a VERY long time.

I only know myself...and even that I don't know well.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-01-05 12:36 PM

wonderful duet! wonderful!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2004-01-05 12:45 PM

teenpoet: And then there are times when forever doesn't seem nearly long enough. *S* Thank you! *S*

passing shadows: Thank you so much, kind lady... glad you liked! *S*

vandana: My greatest thanks are to you... I truly appreciate your willingness to write with me... and I did so enjoy the experience! *S*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-01-05 01:03 PM

Very nice du-et!
Much enjoyed the read!
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2004-01-05 01:04 PM

A very good poem, you two. I enjoyed.

Hugs to you both

Ethel

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-01-05 02:56 PM

VanDana & SweetSuthernGal~
Now just how sweet is this ???

VERY

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2004-01-05 06:59 PM

Ladies, you have done very well with this
blending of talents...Vandana, your english
is doing very nicely.....keep growing...

Ok Ruth....here I is....

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2004-01-05 09:11 PM

I liked the anticipation and obvious impatience.

kudos ladies, you did really good~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2004-01-06 09:15 AM

So sweet and lovely and WARM.
Bravo both.
Love, Margherita

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

10 posted 2004-01-06 09:34 AM

*pout* You never suggested something to write with me, you two! I could have written something (you are real partial to kitties are ya?). Or, we could have vilified those two ne-er-do-wells Balladeer and Toerag. Or we could have a little poetic menage *perk*.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2004-01-06 09:36 AM

A beautiful duet! Very nice!

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

12 posted 2004-01-06 10:33 AM

a very nice duet! Paul

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2004-01-06 05:14 PM

Enchantress: I'm glad you enjoyed... thank you! *S*

garysgirl: vandana's email was such a pleasant surprise... thank you! *S*

Marge: No sweeter than you, my friend... thank you! *S*

Magnus: And? *G* I haven't gone anywhere! *S* Thank you!

Blues: And I thought we were so subtle. LOL Thank you, my friend... so much! *S*

Margherita: LOL @ WARM... Thank you so much... I'm glad you like! *S*

LJA: So you'll put me off but perk for threesomes? LOL My ego just jumped out the window. *G* Thanks, ya ole reprobate. *G*

Sunshine: Thank you very much, kind lady... glad you liked! *S*

Goodknight: Thank you so much... I hope vandana will honor me again one day. *S*

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

14 posted 2004-01-06 05:20 PM

Ooh, I like this! And it is so good to see our Suthern lady duetting --

More! More! More!

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2004-01-06 11:14 PM

Like this...a lot...James

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

16 posted 2004-01-07 10:10 AM

Ratleader: LOL... be careful what you wish for, my friend... especially when I share that wish! *G* Thank you so much... I'm glad you like! *S*

James Michael: I'm so glad you do... it was a wonderful experience. *S* Thank you!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

17 posted 2004-01-07 10:11 AM

vandana: I thank you so much for this opportunity... it was a pleasure. *S*

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