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The Vine
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The Vine |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Vine I am a grape upon the vine Stomped and pressed into a wine Crushed beneath the grime and feet And bottled into liquid heat I’m now an aphrodisiac To smoke the mind to haze and lack To mark and edit the exist To change the color of the mist And this I do with faulty glove And fly the dove of faulty love A drink of equilibrium A conundrum of axiom Although at times I can revive And make the subject feel alive Bring a subtle attitude To grant a little latitude So drink me if you feel the heed But limit it to just the need. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Morning Seymour,  they do say that wine is a good medicine. Hugs  Ethel |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Your words always encourage the need to drink, Sy - lol. Just kidding. Great write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
liquid heat... ~smiling~ at your words this morning, Sy M |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And bottled into liquid heat I’m now an aphrodisiac ============================ You aint neva lied honey chile  tis what makes Randy sooooo deeeeeelightfully dandy  LOLHappy New Year me sweet Sybabes. *ww*    |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nothing longer lasting than a grapevine of time, Sy... Smiling at your wit with pleasure and realizing we still have so much to learn from you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love your pearls of wisdom today Sy! Hope you have a good one and a great weekend ahead. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi Seymour...love this piece. Excuse me I need to go get a glass of wine. (Snicker!) Just joking. Great piece of writing my friend. Made my morning. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oooo, don't talk about drinking right now  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Popping corks here in celebration of your poetry~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Your telling me that they don't wash their feet before they stomp the grapes? (grime and feet) ACK! Now I know why I drink Coors Light... once again a good un, ya know, you could write a bad one just once to make us mere mortal poets not feel so bad... A tip of the glass to ya, (just one) and Happy New Year. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Very nicely done Sy~ I sipped each word so slowly, as the need is to be. Love the messages you send! |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
I just love reading your verses..they are always so wonderful. Thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
This is outstanding. Why is it that the poets on this website have not mixed to create the best coffee table book money can buy? |
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