Open Poetry #30 |
Far Beyond The Sapphire Sky |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Jim Warren * * * I watch you glide above the ocean And skim the water effortlessly You live between the sky And the deep blue of the sea When the dark clouds block the sun You seek shelter from the storm With feathers ruffled around you In an effort to keep warm As the sun starts sinking lower At the edge of the shining sea You fly towards the horizon So graceful and carefree At night you huddle on the sand As the waves crash upon the shore And in the first light of morning You set on out to explore I look at you in wonder And feel my spirit start to rise As you let the thermals take you Far beyond the sapphire sky * * * "We are all angels with only one wing...... we can fly only be embracing each other" I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (01-02-2004 03:45 PM).] |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Nice one, Suetang might I add . . . then stretch their wings to air and gust as if to show us what we've traded off we stand and watch their display of trust in what we dream could take us aloft |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
oohhh, pretty! Beautiful images you've congered up in my mind! I loved everything about this from the flow to the rythm to the imagery to..all of it! Nicely done! ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Krawdad Thanks so much for that lovely addition. Bella I'm so glad you liked my words. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sue, you are incredibly inspiring! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sue~ LOVE the title ... and you worked it beautifully~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
you took me to a wonderful place and that place is your heart, thank you for sharing this beautiful piece. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Dixie As always, thank you for your kindness Marge Thanks so much for your lovely comment marcel Your words touched my heart. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sue - how lovely these words are and how inspiring - I loved this - Paul |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Paul It is always so nice to hear from you, thank you for your kind words. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Very beautiful piece. You are so fortunate to live close to the sea and all the wonderful creatures along the shore. Right now, I'm looking at 16 inches of snow! Wish I were with you! Love, Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Sue...this is especially lovely and soft. Thank you for sharing such an inspiring gift. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I look at you in wonder And feel my spirit start to rise As you let the thermals take you Far beyond the sapphire sky what a lovely stanza and feel to your words... Happy New Year, Sue, hope you are well M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh, what a beautiful poem, Sue. And, the picture is just as beautiful. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Betty Lou Thank you so much for your comment and I cannot imagine being surrounded by snow, just as you must find it hard to imagine 30 degrees celcius which is what we have here in Melbourne today. Lovely to hear from you my friend, as always. jc Your words really humbled me, thank you so much. Maureen How nice to hear from you and thank you for your lovely words. I am fine thanks and I wish for you much love and happiness throughout the New Year. Sue It is always so nice to read your kind words and I wish you all the very best. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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