Open Poetry #30 |
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New Year's, 1951 |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
New Year’s, 1951 I am not sure what all passed by… for I never asked about their first New Year’s Day… I should have. All I can envision are two, gloriously in love after four months of marriage, making the best in a small alcove of an apartment, a small tree, perhaps, tinsel in sparkle huge lights too big and heavy for the spiny stems of a small evergreen tree… All I can imagine are the colors and sounds of a very early 1951, the world before them, him in his handsome best, and she in her dreams of youth… then time passed, too quickly, parents thinking by some kind osmosis, children should just know everything that had occurred before their birth… all I know is 37 years later, she kissed him a Happy New Year as if she were that youthful girl and he, he looked at her with his handsome best. How better to celebrate a wonderful life? 42300 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-01-2004 08:51 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes, how better to celebrate life? Love the new pic as well. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea With his handsome best...that line just brought it all home. A very touching poem. ![]() |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Couldn't agree more with this loving write my friend...hope (wish) all would feel that way on New Year's day. jwesley |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
How, indeed! A beautiful poem about a beautiful couple. Thank you, Sunshine. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching...thanks for the warmth |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sunshine, This is such a pretty reflection! Like wine, the better with time... Sadie |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
then time passed, too quickly, parents thinking by some kind osmosis, children should just know everything that had occurred before their birth… Hey, I know this! A lovely write, you painted quite a portrait, handsome indeed. Patricia |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh, this is beautiful, it reminds me of my Mom and Dad (when he was still alive) Thanks Karilea. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
oh I see his eyes and gentle smile. beautiful Karilea ![]() "I can't believe |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
takes me back... ~smiling~ M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I don't think there is any better way to celebrate! How fortunate to still love like that after all the years. A wonderful life, and a wonderful telling, indeed~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You have wonderful memories -- thanks for sharing them! BEEEEEEEEEwell! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You do capture the essence of a relationship that lasts..so well. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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