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Reflections of a "First" Day |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Reflections of a “First” Day Easy silk strewn morn Murmurings waited while a Day simmered, lazy ~ Resolutions find promise New Year looking quite secure ~*~ And the novel will soon Be finished. Ha! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A peaceful feel to a new year... Cheers Karilea. Good luck on the novel. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes!! I love this. Especially the small print.  ~Hugs to you and yours~ In the midst of winter.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a nice picture  and a nice poem beside it hugs M |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful Karilea! hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Well, I can relate to the day simmering, lazy part...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very strong and inspiring |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ A day-two smile~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The lazy simmer is such a smooth touch. You're writing is always so soft and gentle. Nicely done Karilea~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 for both  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sunshine, Very much enjoyed, Cerenity |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Nice, Sunshine...thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is beautiful, K. I feel it (yes, I am coming to understand my own intuition...hmmm, again through the power of poetry.) Resolutions will become realities this year. As for me, I am taking on the world one thought at a time. I hope that makes sense to you! (smiles) Another hug for you, my friend. Patricia |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sunshine, "Easy silk strewn morn Murmurings waited while a Day simmered, lazy ~" You make it so easy to imagine this feeling. Sunshine, I love the alliterations in this! Sadelite |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
When a New Year comes to mind Can resolutions trail behind? Or do they twist up in the wind for we've not the will to bind? I wish for you your muse is kind and cobwebs peel like empty rind. And in your thoughts you come to find that every phrase is neatly aligned. Good writing..as always. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sounds like your year is off to a great start! lol........jo |
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