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two syllables too much for me (another true serenity story)
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two syllables too much for me (another true serenity story) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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There was a guy named "Gimo" he graced my home last night-- he smiled and said "Geronimo" was his name by his birthright. I thanked him for the shortcut then and said it just might well have been two syllables too much for me So "Gimo" was his name-o. He smelled of suede (or so he claimed) I smelled oils dubious-- He said his grandpa owned the range (Geronimo was flame-glo?) But he had the whitest teeth and fangs of his appeared on whim, I thought I'd like a taste of him but Gimo was the same--oh? Shame on me and shame on her for such the pretty pair made we (Gimo was her name, yanno) And shame on her, and tsk, to me.  Happy New Year. Heh. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Happy New Year, Karen...we missed you last night/this morning  May All Good Things Come Your Way M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Chuckling, and ready to throw a pillow at you for putting that tune into my head! You are horrible! It's MUCH to early to be acting like a little girl! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
bingo, bingo, bingo...  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
ahahahaha!! You are a mess, SereneOne. LOL Just where were you last night? We thought that you might pop in. LOL Hugs Ethel |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I must still be buzzed...  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I'd love to reply this In it's real sense But I want the abiltity To be able write on the site again. Earthy, unstated, not fully explored Pandora opening a box and _ Happy New Year. Dave |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
ahhhh now write something else to get this tune OUT of my head! pleaseeeee! I read it earlier and have been singing it since! Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
blush...I feel like I have to apologize for this one. I really need to get the tunes outta my head before I start writing sometimes... and I'd love to clarify this one, but it seems some things are best left to the imagination--grin--which is sorta the point of me poem.  Happy Belated New Year from one tired witch. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
grins |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
grinning back atchya Raph...  and Davepage? You'll find I'm open to critique--if it's on my account you feel hindered in your reply, don't worry about that. k? |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Serenity, You did it! I just got that tune out of my head after it caused me to misspell banjo three times in a poem I posted called Robert, Guitar and "BANGO" Maker! Aw, the affects of those childhood songs! Please don't try the Chipmunk Song!!!!! Just kidding! Sadie [This message has been edited by Sadelite (01-02-2004 10:36 PM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Weird poem -- but sometimes weird is good! Don't explain, please! Heheheh.....Just know I do appreciate what you write. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Karen I could just, just, just - ooooooh, I hate that song! LOL, cute true story though. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Smiling at you... You know I LOVE your true serenity stories... and love YOU... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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