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icebox
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0 posted 2004-01-01 02:27 AM





no joy can be wished
for abandoning lovers
reckoning awaits

     ©2004 by icebox

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1 posted 2004-01-01 10:57 AM


There are many kinds of abandonment...and many kinds of lover, as we know. And also, many kinds of reckoning, some very good for both reckoners...I hope that's the kind you have.

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2 posted 2004-01-01 01:03 PM


indeed

but the future awaits, another road is there somewhere

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3 posted 2004-01-01 02:56 PM


sometimes,,the one being abandoned,,,is joyful to be abandoned,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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4 posted 2004-01-01 03:12 PM


icebox

I started thinking about this bold statement...thinking joy, like peace is
such a fleeting thing that blinks on and off in a life.  I'm not sure if
it can be given, as in a wish, because it is an internal individual thing
that happens, and the reasons are as varied as people are.

Maybe that's why those two things are wished..because they come so seldom
and are so welcomed.  I know I have wished both for you and still do.  Hug!

Thanks for making me think about something I probably would never have thought about if not for this poem.

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5 posted 2004-01-01 04:18 PM


enjoyed
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