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Crystal Crucifix
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Crystal Crucifix |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Crystal Crucifix Rain is the sky that cries Remorseful as the man that sighs; Liquid sadness dropping like warm love Icing upon the touch of Gaea’s black grove; There, nothing grows from the cold Or yearns to be old. To all such things there is a core And deep within is a crucifix that bleeds-- A holy fortress of the sleeping dead, Dreaming of black birds loose from cage, Released before creation from one with rage, So long ago but still their hearts enrage--- But a Son would be born in eternities elixir To quiet the cries of Angels and sinners. Captured moments, captured tears Upon said hymns my Savior hears, Within listening hearts an adversary fears--- But fear not the prophecy ancient one The truth is hidden behind Angels and stone, Where the four horsemen hide and wait To release a Messiah from His crystal fate. Marcel |
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chrissydome Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 73germany |
i really like the pictures you draw in your poem! good work! |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Wow. That's the first poem I've read since I've been back here at Pip. That was amazing. The rhyme scheme wasn't forced and it really flowed. You should be proud you wrote such a beautiful piece. Nice job. Allison |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. This is the first of your writes I have seen. Much applause to you for this is truly a worthy read. Look forward to more of your writes. ThisDiamond |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nice imagery |
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