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chrissydome
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germany

0 posted 2003-12-31 10:01 AM



every joke burns like hell
every word makes me cry
all those cars racing in my direction
if only i could fly


now i'm hiding behind my camera
from hypocrisy flying around
behind it i feel safe from those feelings
that could throw me to the ground


pour wine over my body
take the children out to play
when you'll be back i might be here
or i might me far away



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Michelle_loves_Mike
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1 posted 2003-12-31 11:05 AM


you have a way with words,,,,,wondering why you locked the threads of the other poems you posted......
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

EverRuss
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Indiana
2 posted 2003-12-31 11:26 AM


You do have a wonderful way with words. You can make something so dark be beautiful. Keep writing
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-12-31 12:56 PM


Michelle, ther eis a rule here about posting only three poems in a day, out of respect for th eother poets, since this is a busy, fast-moving place...that's why the threads were locked.

Maybe she can repost three of those in another day.

Though I cannot reply, I'm glad to be able to read them all.

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Gaia
4 posted 2003-12-31 01:21 PM


LOL, I've hid behind the camera a few times myself.
Have a safe and happy new year.

wordwizard
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on the way to next world
5 posted 2003-12-31 11:55 PM


might be far away even when present and that's not because I don't pay attention...I have paid too much attention to empty talk


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