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exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-01-02 10:50 PM


old begginings plauge me
new begginings corrupt me
i dont feel any different
but i am
i know i am
i can feel see it in your eyes
the deep blue is haunting
i could get lost in them..
the new year
my promise to you
my new years resolution
i'll stop loving you
i'll stop breaking your heart
you only have one
and i dont have any more glue left
to give you...
"hello my name is..distance.."

[This message has been edited by exhale (01-02-2004 10:51 PM).]

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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-01-02 11:38 PM


This is soooooooooo sad -- sounds like a really difficult situation -- best wishes for a better year!
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-01-03 05:20 AM


very cool!
xela
Junior Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 13

3 posted 2004-01-03 05:53 AM


A desperate situation---well written!
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2004-01-03 08:45 AM


Great!

The key is in "I know I AM".

That is as close as it can be.

Love, Margherita

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