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The Unsaid |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA 
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As I gaze upon your face While you tie your sons shoes, Do I dare be so brazen, And tell you, you’re my muse? As we lay hip to hip In the sweet afterglow Tell me, do I let it pass these lips? Shall I attempt to stay awake, For fear that in my sleep The silence I may break When you catch me in my stare Do I let you in on That of which I am already aware Do I tell you, do I let go of this control? And express to you that which you Have left upon my soul |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
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I enjoyed... you could build on it a bit or leave it as is, but teh muse for whom it was written should see this.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
thank you sunshine! and cpat..yes I actually was going longer with it...but cut it off as sometimes I tend to get to lengthy and I didn't want to be redundant...so I stopped...thank you for the suggestion..and as far as letting him see this...I dare not....  not yet anyhowThere are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create. |
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