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Open Poetry #30

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crystalclearpoems
Junior Member

since 2003-12-30

Posts 16

0 posted 2003-12-30 01:58 PM

this is a poem i wrote about a guy i liked...

Your in my mind and your in my soul even though i dont want you to know.Your the secret i've kept inside,your the person that keeps me alive.You are the one that i love some much,you are the one that i mustnt touch.You are the one thats my secret key to all the things that live inside me.

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

1 posted 2003-12-30 02:06 PM

Ut oh, Crystal... Is your name a contradiction to your style? I like your poem, but a few Hard Returns would've been nice - lol.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-12-30 02:07 PM

Welcome to Passions. This is a sweet poem
that you have written. I hope that you enjoy PIP.
Please check your e-mail for a special greeting
from all of us here.
Hugs

Ethel/garysgirl
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Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

3 posted 2003-12-30 07:16 PM

crystalclearpoems,

When I read you poem like this:

"You're in my mind and you're in my soul,
even though I don't want you to know.
You're the secret I've kept inside,
you're the person that keeps me alive.
You are the one that I love so much,
you are the one that i mustn't touch.
You are the one that's my secret key
to all the things that live inside me."

I find it most enjoyable.

Welcome to Passions!

[This message has been edited by Munda (12-30-2003 07:18 PM).]

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