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crystalclearpoems
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0 posted 2003-12-30 02:32 PM


she really cares about you
i dont think she'd ever doubt you
and this is what you give her,
nothing in return.
you hurt her so bad and for that i hope you pay.
i hope some girl you really love
breaks your heart one day.
that is how she feels these days
and i know its all your fault
maybe your not sensitive or
maybe your just dumb
but what she feels and how she crys
is not what i'd call fun

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LngJhnAg
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1 posted 2003-12-30 02:42 PM


She has a wonderful ally, though, Crystal.
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-12-30 03:03 PM


Crystal~
Welcome to Passions~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Daniel van Vliet
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3 posted 2003-12-30 04:39 PM


..... what a great write, so raw, and simple. I really enjoyed this write... keep it up!
Michelle_loves_Mike
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4 posted 2003-12-30 04:48 PM


its good to have a friend that sees how you feel,,,and lets people know about it
good stuff
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
5 posted 2003-12-30 06:02 PM


Sweet, and what a shoulder you must have for her. You are an angel in a dark time I'm sure. Many hugs.
Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

Juju
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In your dreams
6 posted 2003-12-30 07:03 PM


I've seen that same old story to many times.
Juju

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