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End of Term - very loose and silly
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End of Term - very loose and silly |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Well, can you keep the boys quiet for the moment Mr Smith Yes I know they want to raise the roof At least let us get it fitted first As I believe is the term Yes I know the rain is coming in But the boilers are fightin back Yes I know the steam is coming through Our computer controls they hacked I know the organ pipes have gone I'd hoped we perservere There is enough wind in these lads To put the world in fear I know they are all in their shorts To keep the heat down No I didn't give the green shampoo around I just wanted On the eve of term To manage just one speech Without my fears confirmed But so I must and with these words Welcome you to go And please bring back the bricks this time I have nowhere else to go |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dave, I enjoyed reading this poem. I could almost see the school room with the kids and the mischief in their eyes.  Hugs  Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good humor! Good writing. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I like this! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Greatly enjoyable write! Love, Margherita  |
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