Open Poetry #30 |
Liza June |
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
She was just ole mammy’s girl Dancing to her own tune Smilin’ for naught at all They called her Liza June She may have been a simple girl But she held love for all No hatred felt within her heart She lived by an angel’s call They taunted her with ferocity But still her smile remained Their slaps and smacks unfelt by her No matter how much they pained In a world that God gave to her She smiled as she danced alone Simple, yes, you could say she was But she had no sin to atone “Love ‘em all, I surely do” she sang as her feet kept time ‘God gave us all roads to walk and mountains tall to climb’ “And I will climb the tallest yet with love for everyone resting on the peak one day I’ll know my work is done’ Liza June danced on and on Touched lives with each smile Touched heart with her bravery As she walked pure down God’s mile. |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
This goes right along with your discussion thread, doesn't it? lovely write |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
There is a Liza June in all of us and I sure wish she would come out more often. Well you know I do recall knowing a very little Miss Liza Dolittle once, and as she grew bigger, so did her heart. Being simple sometimes is the best way to see this world I think. Oh goodness I do believe you have me thinking here! A lovely poem that carries a big message. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great message very touching |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Ms. deVine Thank you for helping to keep this type of poetry alive...a breath of fresh air in a sometimes stagnant poetry world.... I enjoyed reading about Liza June.......:-) _________ice ><> |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've been writing more lately... I'm sure hoping this portends to all of us a fullness of literary inspiration from your pen in the coming New Year! Thank you, PdV! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Sharon! I enjoyed reading about Liza June. Love to see more! Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
“Love ‘em all, I surely do” she sang as her feet kept time ‘God gave us all roads to walk and mountains tall to climb’ “And I will climb the tallest yet with love for everyone resting on the peak one day I’ll know my work is done’ I loved hearing about your "Liza June", also, and would love to hear more, Sharon. Hugs, Ethel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ Different for you ... and a wonderful penning~ Happy New Year's blessings to you and yours~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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