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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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  "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! this is gorgeous! Might want to make the writing a little bigger though...I had to get about an inch from the monitor to read this...use a different font or color...something...or maybe it's my computer *shrugging* anyhow, it's beautiful! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is difficult to read - could you amend it and put the words below so that we who are lacking in the way of eyesight can take it all in...what I could make out is quite beautiful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Snow~ I found the all of this TOTALLY BEAUTIFUL~ Happy New Year's blessings to you and yours~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
i'm sorry for those that had a problem.... no one had one elsewhere. and i always check with my image/poems to make sure. spirit bound inside you, inside me, my words & voice are, & yours to me i envy their ability to crawl inside (us) long for their power to touch you as they do jealous of the ease they wrap their arms around you, yes an extension of me, personified in black & white, & sound waves, but god how i wish to travel the same path they do, through & over you 'til we are bound not by promises but, lavender leather heart to breast where each breath is one earthquake away from my crucifixion and the demise of one shadow upon shadow behind your eyes communion lingers & through your mouth i'll find redemption ©snow 12/29/03 "...why does my skeleton pursue me if my soul has fallen away?" ~p.neruda [This message has been edited by Snow (12-30-2003 03:35 PM).] |
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