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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Through the window glass |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
soft & lovely. thankyou for this. Chris "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
captured moment..and the transition of thought to dream... with the metaphor fo sun and ice.. nicely done.. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Mesmerizing! Thank you, Paul! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
From Nightshade: soft & lovely. thankyou for this. Chris YOu are welcome Chris I am appreciating your comments and find inspiration in your poetic voice ~C |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
From Cpat Hair: "captured moment..and the transition of thought to dream... with the metaphor fo sun and ice.. nicely done.. " Thank you CH for the compliment and for your perceptive and sensitive reading...~C |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
JC wrote: "Mesmerizing! Thank you, Paul! Love and Light..." You welcome and thank you jc....~C |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Through the window glass in the sunlight's soft pale rays warmth spreads on my face- as ice floats on the river and thoughts give way to dreams. through the smiling sun we are all as beautiful in her window view |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
very gentle write... just beautiful. take care, Amy  "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Choshi -- I agree totally with Capt Hair -- in my mind's eye, I could actually see the expression on the face! ......hugs |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
*glowing* it's so easy to see the imagery in all you write, this one is no exception (but it certainly is exceptional!) DawnSomeday I'll fly, Someday I'll soar, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Glad someone brought this back up as I missed it! And I do so like your stuff! "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Short, sweet and full of life and feeling... beautiful imagery too! Thank you for this  Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very inspiring! what a scene! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
through the smiling sun we are all as beautiful in her window view yes, oh yes! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Aimster: very gentle write... just beautiful. take care, Amy Aww, thank you Amy...~C |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Iliana: Choshi -- I agree totally with Capt Hair -- in my mind's eye, I could actually see the expression on the face! ......hugs Iliana, dear, well, then who am I to disagree...then you know this face is smiling,,,,[*hugs* back...]~C |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Nice...James Thank you James.... ~C |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
*glowing* it's so easy to see the imagery in all you write, this one is no exception (but it certainly is exceptional!) Aww...Muted, now you have me *glowing* too, and enjoying your playful use of words ~C |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Glad someone brought this back up as I missed it! And I do so like your stuff! "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel" Thank you Susan...I really like your quote ~C |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you for this Brian ...you welcome Brian...and thank you for your kindness ~C |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
very inspiring! what a scene! Thank you Dixie, and now you have me on the edge of my seat eager to see what evolves from your inspiration...[inspiration is a certainly a two-way street] ~C |
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richard taylor Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 136 |
Helo, Its hard keeping track on here its so fast, I wanted to read some of your work. This is quite lovely perfect flow you are a good writer. regards Richard. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Richard, its nice to be meeting you...yes things do move fast, such creativity flowing forth...still not used to it myself....~C |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, I love your stained-glass fantasies you create from your words, sweet friend, you are a true artist in all magical forms, God Bless You, may you always look through murano-glass goggles, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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