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evolution2
New Member

since 2003-12-29

Posts 6

0 posted 2003-12-29 10:29 PM

I want to expound you
And stamp you into dampened earthy clay that runs under autumn leaves
of gold and sienna and sunset yellows
where little children play hopscotch near crinkly newspaper brownstones
and shriek into the sky as they toss their petite round heads back with glee
to feel the soul that punches and pushes and tears to break out into the air
into the night
into a life less ordinary and still
much more simple in a vast and nodescript way
to wake up from a night of platinum opera in an oversized bed with soft sheets
that makes me want to scream " I love you" so that it rips you
like a string is tied to your heart
and pulls you from your universe into a wishy washy world of crazy and
unending love
with hash brown mornings
baseball games and wine
while #41 flutters around like an angel delivering wishes to tiny closed eyes
with arched eyelashes dipped in a paintbrush of sleep on cool pillowcases..
to be swaddled in rest by a sound blanket
rocking like a sailboat on the waves
and its alright to dance barefoot in the living room
and giggle about secrets that only you know
But the best, the incredible, the invincible is a sky speckled with stars
And us sleeping entangled with twenty tiny toes dangling over the edge
this is how I know I will end every day
I just kissed the war goodbye with one look at you

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

1 posted 2003-12-29 10:44 PM

wow....welcome newcomer, i think you can pretty the world maybe better than alot of us here. thanks for the words, they touched me.

joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-12-29 10:54 PM

Welcome to Passions. Thanks for joining us.
I hope that you enjoy yourself here.

Please check your e-mail for a special
greeting from all of us at PIP.
Thanks,

garysgirl
Moderator/Passions In Poetry

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-12-29 11:04 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very much enjoyed your entrance post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

evolution2
New Member

since 2003-12-29

Posts 6

4 posted 2003-12-29 11:07 PM

im actually not new
i use to post under evolution a long time ago(1999-ish) when I was younger. I just couldnt recall my password and no longer use the same email

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2003-12-30 12:53 PM

Oh my gosh! Incredible! Welcome back!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-12-30 02:37 AM

I can relate

incredible writing!

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

7 posted 2003-12-30 09:26 AM

a truly beautiful write, welcome
back to Passions, I look forward
to reading more from you!

Take care,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-12-30 09:31 AM

You fell into love so beautifully! Welcome to Passions! I am going to enjoy watching your work progress...

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

evolution2
New Member

since 2003-12-29

Posts 6

9 posted 2004-01-08 11:32 PM

thanks for all the kind words

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2004-01-09 12:36 PM

Hi, and Welcome to Passions. We are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

Kindly

Greeneyes~

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2004-01-12 11:38 AM

(big angel hugs) Yay! Awwwwwwww, it is so great to have you back here, sweet friend, I didn't join until December of 2000 so I may not have met you before here, so allow me to introduce myself, Noah Eaton, the Mistletoe Angel, yay! That #41 reference wouldn't happen to be of the Dave Matthews Band song, would it? I absolutely love that song! (smiles) This is a fabulous comeback debut, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

evolution2
New Member

since 2003-12-29

Posts 6

12 posted 2004-01-14 09:27 PM

yes it is a dave matthews reference

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