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A Flower Named Weobaei (Fifth Installment Weobaei Series)
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A Flower Named Weobaei (Fifth Installment Weobaei Series) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA 
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dressed in morning's misty dew stretching stem to greet the sun drinking from the Earth's sweet loam. Now blossomed white with yellow hue fluted crown all fresh and new growing under angel wings. Swaying winds around her sing. The lily, she Weobaei. Weobaei wonders not the day or worries all her ways away. Manaeshte blessed her so to stay perhaps a month, perhaps a day. She breaths in life and breaths out beauty, not thinking that to be her duty assigned by Manaeshte's rule. Omahpaista flutter near spreading her pollen here and there for more the joy to others flow. And this is how Weobaei grows, glorifying her creator. Iliana |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I've really enjoyed this Weobaei series, and the variety of imagery you given us. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
MNS, thanks for reading during this time that I know must be very busy for you. You, dear one, are the lily, just as you (and all humanbeings) are the horse, and all the other things that Weobaei is -- my final Weobaei poem (which is written but I think there are a few more to come in between) will relate everything, I hope. [This message has been edited by iliana (01-13-2004 09:17 PM).] |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Iliana I am truly in awe by this wonderful write of yours. It is a ballet of poetry. In wonder I follow. Thank you for sharing this and your unrelenting inspiraton. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Iliana, your writing is...how shall I describe it...sophisiticated, I think. It is always a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
steavnr -- likewise. What a very nice thing to say although I never thought of it that way! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ravenwolfvoyager -- whew, wow, I'm glad you like it. I'm rather in awe of your work. I have three more written -- they'll go up before long -- that may be the end of this series, not sure yet. But thanks for reading them, it means a lot! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is incredible... I just have to say you caught my attention BIG TIME! Great work. Sincerely, Sauni  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Saunni (or is it Sauni?? -- saw both spellings), your message was so sweet. Thanks for taking time to stop by (have you read the first four in this series yet -- just curious).  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
What flavor....I just love these poems, and I have a feeling that there is the makings of a book in them. They are so tasty! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
RL -- thanks so much. Perhaps, a small book of verse, we'll see. That's great encouragement you've given. Hope all's well. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
She breaths in life and breaths out beauty, As you do with your words... Wonderful series! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Suthern, thank you kindly! I am glad you are enjoying them. Have a nice day! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Swaying winds around her sing. Your poetry exactly! Excellent iliana! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sadelite - You are a doll. By the way, I loved your post about the doggie. |
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