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Open Poetry #30

Will you go Sorry Dreams

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2003-12-29 05:47 PM

The frost in on the grass
And the trees are sweetly greying
And that old motorway
Swings around the crystal mountain
Where bank balances grow
Developers hubba hubba
Sports cars burning
Up the red hot rubber
Around the dark grey mountain
That once really mattered
Will you go sorry dreams

And my dreams are forged on faith
But without the slaughter
In the car’s blue light
Of someone else's daughter
Will you go sorry dreams

Where wild people go
And the headlights mutter
Melting like butter
Sounding their horns in the gutter
Will you go sorry dreams

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2003-12-29 05:56 PM

interesting.......I enjoyed!

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2003-12-30 06:13 PM

Thanks

Dave

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-12-30 07:19 PM

You have an interesting way
with words yourself...
if mine are restricted...
yours glow.

Thank you.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2003-12-30 11:27 PM

Sunshine

You are spoiling me.

But thank you for doing so.

Dave

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