Open Poetry #30 |
looking back... |
Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
At first it seems oh so far away We stood on one and looked out there Mostly we looked behind to see What was interesting from back then We remembered and laughed and cried We saw what had been not always knowing why But ahead was even more difficult Ahead was unclear and unknown and scary So now we stand again with days gone by Looking back and wondering what and why But ahead there is another time to live A time we don’t know just what will be So each time we look back and see what has been Here we are with some much ahead so much to begin To love to laugh to hold to cry We always seem to look back We always seem to ponder what is ahead But mostly love to look back I wonder why |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ahhhhhhhhhhh, known vs. the unknown, that is the question......a very happy new year is wished your way, Goodknight! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Paul...sometimes we need to stand back and 'remember' when. All the best in 2004 to you and yours. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Paul, yes, memories. Looking back is not as fearful as trying to imagine what the future holds can be. Well done, enjoyed. Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Hi GoodKnight...must be in the air, because looking back was what I was doing today and I wrote "Why Did It All Begin?" If you get a minute give it a look, because it's like this looking back, and wondering you are talking about. Happy New Year to you, and all you love! Terri~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Paul, that is a good question...I guess we look back more because that is the known and where the good memories are. I think the bad memories are what make us fearful or apprehensive of the future and the unknown. Hugs, "Love isn't blind, it just only sees what matters." William Curry |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
hmmm...good food for thought so to speak! I enjoyed this piece. The thought of looking back on the memories while anticipating tomorrow...sigh...very well done. Happy new year! ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
But mostly love to look back I wonder why? because old memories sweet or sore are always welcomed. good write,so profound and deep. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that is what I wonder too, only because I'm guilty of it |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautiful words of contemplation here Paul, I enjoyed this so very much and could relate so well. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul...It seems like this time of year, many people are reflecting on the past and also wondering what the future holds. You have expressed it well! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well said, my friend. You speak thoughts I've had, and no doubt will have again, but may never express as well as you just did. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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